Fantasy sneak peek

It was windy outside and it was about to rain. I started walking to my favourite place. I walked for about 20 minutes and finally I got there. It was an old well. It had some slugs on it and flies flying around it. I started throwing rocks in the well. I always do that to calm down. I started walking to it so I could see if the water is high or low. I suddenly tripped over a rock and fell into it.I was so scared because I thought I would hit the water or ground. After one minute I was floating in the air thinking of some stuff like, is Jerry looking for me right now? How much deeper does this well go? WHY AM I AVENTLY EVEN HERE!?
I chose this paragraph because I thought it will tell a tiny bit of the story. The first paragraph is a paragraph that has a stile of writing that I really like. I like the first sentence the most because it really fits with his feeling, he is actually sad at that part of the story. The second paragraph is really funny, well that’s my opinion. I think it’s funny because I thought to myself what if I was floating in the air that would be cool, right.

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